Dj187's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Breaking the Habit(Cover)]

I liked where this was goin.

If you put more work into it you would have a nice remix there, but it honestly sounds a bit crappy so far, Sit more effects onto ur vocals and the song.

Ragezero responds:

I have to fix my mic first, and might redo it the vocals without playing piano at the same time. But it's a start ;)

[System Split - F-777]

Great Song Mate!

I thought iit was AWESOME, there was a few little thing tho that coulda been fixed, where it stops and goes again was a unique touch to the song, but you shoulda done some sorta fade in, jus a little bit and that woulda sounded maad, and maybe a bit more use for the subs woulda been nice, the only fair thing hitting the subs was the explosions, but the kick was a bit weak, all up.
GREAT Melody Work!
GREAT Drum Work!
FKN AWESOME All Up

This Deserves a 5/5 but a 9/10 cos it needs some fixes!
im hopin this hits the weekly top 5 (Y)

Mindstomper

F-777 responds:

Ye your right i didn't quite do the switches right. Thanks so much for
the review!!!

[Scratch organ]

XD times 100000000000000000000000000000000000

This has been classified N for Noob, im guessin you've just started and had like 2 or so months workin with it, DOWNLOAD SOME FUCKIN SAMPLES.. USE THA MIXER... YOUTUBE TUTORIALS ON FL... There is so much more than basic samples and synths... TOXIC BIOHAZARD FTW!!!!

1ufotofu1 responds:

ive looked for so much stuff its not funny and the ones i like cost money... when i used the mixer it did it for the whole song and i hated it...

[ElephANTz of March]

To Be Honest...

Thru the whole song i was just like... Nut, not happenin, you had the theme goin but the mix arounds didnt fit together properly, and the drum wasn't workin, the first bass was not good either, sorry but it wasnt, try something a bit more dominating. all up, the song was "ok but could be much better" work with it!! cos if you dont i will, cos it makes me wanna do a full epic mashup of it, the hat was fine, that and the melody was put together nice, use some crashes and some bongo drums

amtrack responds:

thanks for the input. it was very helpful. this was honestly my first time not using music i make up myself. and this was definitly rougher than what i wanted the end result to be. however i just couldnt get the full picture out of the pieces i had. so instead of starting over i decided to go ahead and submit it then start over. i am definitly continuing work on it. thanks again for the input.

[-MiB!- PORTAL (hardcoreis]

lol not bad so far (Y)

You put more time into this one, whch is what i like to see, the melody is close, the melody needs some more work but the whole songs gettin there, i like what you did with the vocals, Go with the flow..

RandomDanceOfHappy responds:

faster tempo so ya. kick aint hard enough. alot of sounds where takin from portal more thin the voc.
im still fixing the melodys and what not some fragments of my bass are from the game tweaked and everything . lol but this is not close to being done thanks for your time
-MiB!-

[-MiB!- dance :D]

My Fav.

This is my fav cos theres a lotta work that can be done to this to create it to perfection, i see what you mean bout the kick, geeeeez, what are you tryin to do buddy? destroy your song? HAHA, im feelin the melody in this, theres a lotta work that you can do to make this melody awesome! on one of your other songs im hearin you put like 2 or 3 hours work into em, more! as much time as you can try without overcoming with love for the music and jus throwing it out there, this thing can be mastered, if you want my help, chuck me a pm, i'll give you an idea..

[SS - Jump Into The Sky]

There's a lot that needs to be done

You see, everythings too basic, there's no actual feel to it, i would suggest going for a better kick, maybe make some mixes with the beat because its all just simple, put a pad into it, because theres your problem and some nice hits, i would suggest a different lead, that one cuts everything out in a way, you gotta fair way to go, but if you need some hhelp along the road, giv us a msg and i'll help you out :)
Mindstomper

[-<(Cocoon)>-]

thats not bad

you could sell this to like runescape or something, they would pay good money for something like this, saves them makin all their music themselves, it wasnt bad, but you need more than a snare and maybe make it more epic somewhat

Naerbu responds:

Yea lol definitely needs work

Thanks for the review!