Dj187's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[ElephANTz of March]

To Be Honest...

Thru the whole song i was just like... Nut, not happenin, you had the theme goin but the mix arounds didnt fit together properly, and the drum wasn't workin, the first bass was not good either, sorry but it wasnt, try something a bit more dominating. all up, the song was "ok but could be much better" work with it!! cos if you dont i will, cos it makes me wanna do a full epic mashup of it, the hat was fine, that and the melody was put together nice, use some crashes and some bongo drums

amtrack responds:

thanks for the input. it was very helpful. this was honestly my first time not using music i make up myself. and this was definitly rougher than what i wanted the end result to be. however i just couldnt get the full picture out of the pieces i had. so instead of starting over i decided to go ahead and submit it then start over. i am definitly continuing work on it. thanks again for the input.

[-MiB!- PORTAL (hardcoreis]

lol not bad so far (Y)

You put more time into this one, whch is what i like to see, the melody is close, the melody needs some more work but the whole songs gettin there, i like what you did with the vocals, Go with the flow..

RandomDanceOfHappy responds:

faster tempo so ya. kick aint hard enough. alot of sounds where takin from portal more thin the voc.
im still fixing the melodys and what not some fragments of my bass are from the game tweaked and everything . lol but this is not close to being done thanks for your time
-MiB!-

[-<(Cocoon)>-]

thats not bad

you could sell this to like runescape or something, they would pay good money for something like this, saves them makin all their music themselves, it wasnt bad, but you need more than a snare and maybe make it more epic somewhat

Naerbu responds:

Yea lol definitely needs work

Thanks for the review!

[Fried Chicken :D]

KFC!!!!

lol its funny what you can do in 5 minutes, 5 minutes you can inspire a whole song, nice what you did with the vocal, thats kinda what im doin with my next song.

RandomDanceOfHappy responds:

FRIED CHICKEN!
haha thanks ^.^ im just starting editing voices :D
i learned a handful of tricks with this btw
thanks for the review :D

[Intense Birthday Song]

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WOO!!!!! I'm partyin to this!!!!.... rofl (y)

laminationman responds:

lol Thanks!

[Tetris Club Remix II (2)]

Fuckin enjoyiable!!

the kick could be a bit harder and louder tho...

Kreepman responds:

Yeaaaaah, I guess you're right!

[March of the Penguins]

Enjoyable :)

i think this'll made best of the week, i liked it, this could go for a real time game, you got good talent.

Dj Mindstompa

Crow54 responds:

I'm glad that you enjoyed it, cuz from what your saying, that keeps me in high hopes, after the fact that ive been to lazy to work for a while! lol, workin on a new piece, so i hope its gonna be good too. thanks for the enthusiasm

[Super Intense C scale]

self made

pre good, buht not that intense rofl

laminationman responds:

thanks for the good review. And btw the intense description was supposed to be a joke.

[One step ahead]

you lyrics needs work.

the beat iz perfect, lol from 50 ay, maybe try turning that sadness into anger?

juggaloallday responds:

Yea i know its from 50. what with the lyrics need work? Not gonna lie i think i added to much effect on this song. just trying new stuff since i got a new mic.

[Hardstyle/Nustyle Test]

LUVN THE MELODY!

You put this togeva pretty good, buht maybe a diff soundfont for melody, maybe not bring the kick in so quick, and change the kick, sounds good overall. 8/10 4/5
GOOD WORK!
Dj Mindstompa

Dj-Brand0 responds:

hey mindstompa, thank for the review. yeah the leads were a bit quiet and i didn't realise while i was making it. Those new vst's lagged the crap out of my piss weak comp so i didn't really get around to reexporting it. I guess ill try re-export it again sometime. and the kick :) could be fixed. :)

glad you liked it. :D Thanks for the review

-Cheers Brando